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Yama-100% Custom- Yama

September 23rd, 2010, 1:59 pm

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Yamataro,

September 23rd, 2010, 2:49 pm

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@Gata: Use the old for Cameo. Sides. This isn't the final edit of this character. I still have a way to go till he's perfect.
I just posted him for some c+c, and attention. :3 lolno.
The Attention only.
XD

Mist the Moonhunter,

September 23rd, 2010, 5:05 pm

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Yama.
You can't make a goood custom yet though.
;_;

Anyway, putting that aside.
It looks like this sprite is about to fall over.
Just look at the difference in his body and legs.
Its ridicules.
In most cases the body and legs are round about the same size.
Yet here he leans over 2-3 pixels to the right, plus his legs are half the size.
Unless his jacket and shirt are down to his knee caps I suggest you fix that. Also the hands look more like blobs than hands.
I think if you simply made his legs taller and made his body shorter, moved his spine back a couple of pixels.
Then his body posture and proportions would be correct.
Speaking of which,
You should keep the old head.
Because no matter how rude this is gonna sound.
This one looks shit compare to the other one.

Yamataro,

September 23rd, 2010, 5:11 pm

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Thanks mist for your growing support. Again, this is NOT taking the place of the other. Alot of what you said is true, and is already in the process of being fixed. So sit tight, and I'll pump out a newer, better version. Also, The head, I plan on doing that, since I made the quils on the old one by custom anyhow.

WolfieBoy,

September 23rd, 2010, 5:33 pm

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Yeah, mist, you really can't talk about customs at all.

No hate but your customs suck shit.

Short legs long torso.

..No..

Old yama is much better.

They eye shape is to round.

The body looks to humanoid.Take off that dot on the muzzle.The head shape starting off round is a bad way to start a custom.Especially the way you did it.The ear is really big.Hands are good though.The thing is, you end up making yama's torso to long or to big because you try to make sure that people know its a jacket to hard.Which makes it look fat, to long, ect.We can tell its theres a jacket, the shirt is red, darnet.It also looks genesis because of the way you shaded.

Blitzn'Burst,

September 23rd, 2010, 6:45 pm

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psst, mist, this might be better then some of your customs >_> *cough*most*cough*

Mist the Moonhunter,

September 24th, 2010, 2:44 am

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Even if it is.
Why is that at all relevant.
Critic should be taken as long as its correct.

Scar,

September 30th, 2010, 11:20 pm

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No offence Mist but Yama is better at cusoms than you. :(

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