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Kalrin

November 1st, 2017, 9:34 pm

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Shard,

November 1st, 2017, 9:34 pm

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/flips every single table
I HATE SPRITING BIRDS AND I HATE MAKING CUSTOM SPRITES WHY THE FUCK DID I COMBINE THE TWO

...this is Kalrin, he is a tol, decided to sprite him, I'm probably gonna fiddle with the legs and beak because they look a bit awkward the way they are now, THOUGHTS ASIDE FROM HOW MUCH I CLEARLY WANT MYSELF TO SUFFER??

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Frost The Wolf,

November 2nd, 2017, 8:22 am

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So he's a peacock wearing clothes similar to that of Beerus?

Shard,

November 2nd, 2017, 2:29 pm

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http://prntscr.com/h5fdc2 Here's what the outfit looks like. The only thing I immediately notice that's similar to Beerus is the color of the sashes and the necklace-y thing.

G.B.A,

November 2nd, 2017, 3:49 pm

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Would have been nicer in my opinion if the scaled up sprites didn't have the detailed facial expressions.

Tsurugi,

November 2nd, 2017, 4:42 pm

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If you're down for some critique, I like that you're giving things more solid outlines, and the blue cloth reads pretty well, but the gold jewelry gets kind of lost against the pink on the body. I think tinting the darker shades way more towards orange/red would help it pop a lot better.

If you're having trouble with the legs/feet, I'd try using darker shades for the shadows and outline on them, maybe just lift the darker of the two shades you're already using for the eye. For the beak, the general shape looks good but the shading there would also benefit from some darker outlining.

The tail is also a little bit busy, and the pale grey-lavender gets lost against the whites. I'd consider either massively simplifying each individual tail feather and giving them stronger outlines, or instead just not using the heavy black for any of the internal outlines in the tail at all.

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