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Wanted to try an anime scene

April 3rd, 2016, 1:15 am

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April 3rd, 2016, 1:33 am


This is nice, but it doesn't really have the anime feel. Too much bloom, too much shading, and the lines are too thick.


April 3rd, 2016, 7:35 am


Your eyes aren't in the right place. They are too far to the right.


April 3rd, 2016, 12:54 pm


The mouth seems off, it seems to be clipping with the eye, you might need to work on that too. The neck seems very off with the head as well, unless that's hair I am looking at.


April 3rd, 2016, 2:45 pm


Yeah, anime normally goes for the cell-shaded look. And while this looks cool, it's not the cell-shaded look.

Still cool tho.


April 3rd, 2016, 11:08 pm


@.:|CamTro|:.: I'm not mistaken. I've seen his other eye. Both of them are in the wrong spot. They are both too far to the right.

It's the same reason why Met says is mouth seems off, but it seems to be the eyes that are at fault here, not the mouth. You can see this if you look at his nose. His jaw is aligned where it needs to be, but his nose is covering his right eyes, which short of long, it wouldn't do at this angle. The reason Met this the mouth is what's off is because he's using the eyes as a point of reference as to where the mouth should be. Looking at the whole this, that isn't the case however.

His eyes just nee to be moved over to the left more. You may have to redo some of his hair, but it's not a big deal anyways.

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