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Kasura

June 21st, 2015, 6:14 pm

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Shard,

June 22nd, 2015, 2:31 am

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In the future, when uploading content, please just put it in the latest chapter (That is, Hostile Takeover 2.0)! I've taken the liberty of moving it for you, but we don't really have a particular 'sorting method' going here, and putting things in the Unchaptered folder just makes people confused. If you don't know what I mean, then here's the simple version - don't change the chapter when uploading things, and we'll all be fine!

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JermhyTheHedgehog,

June 21st, 2015, 6:18 pm

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rate please 1-10 or comic rating.

furhead,

June 21st, 2015, 7:15 pm

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Holy hell, you should've just resized it down when you imported it to pdn.

JermhyTheHedgehog,

June 21st, 2015, 8:06 pm

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@furhead: Well do you at least like it?

Royle McCulloch,

June 21st, 2015, 9:51 pm

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Have you seen your optometrist lately?

TouhouShake,

June 21st, 2015, 10:09 pm

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"NO NECK CHUMP?!"

-Eddy

JermhyTheHedgehog,

June 22nd, 2015, 7:30 am

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@Shard: Thanks and sorry I'll make sure to put it there next time.

Syogren,

June 22nd, 2015, 11:36 am

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First of all, yeah...next time, you should really shrink your picture so it fits the borders of the comic. Right now it's hard to view if I don't look at the image in another window. If you really want to show people the full-size image, at least shrink it for the comic and then give them a link to a larger image.

As for the image itself...it's a start? You're gonna have to practice your anatomy a bit more; Legs don't bend that way, and I swear his back arm is longer than his front arm. If anything, his back arm should appear slightly smaller due to the perspective.

As for the coloring...looking at it closely, I'm seeing a lot of white borders inside the outlines. I'm a fellow paint.net user, and what I'm guessing you did was use the fill bucket with too low a tolerance. In the future, try increasing the tolerance a bit before using the fill bucket. Even better, I recommend taking advantage of the layers that paint.net offers, and manually color on a layer underneath the outline. That way, you can make sure none of that white appears.

Also, for curved surfaces like spines, muzzles, and basically everything on the image other than the background, I'd stay away from gradients; it looks lazy. Most drawings I see here that use shading only seem to use two or three shades anyway; just a dab of a darker shade here, a bit of a lighter shade there; that's normally enough to trick the brain, assuming you get the light source right. I...actually don't know anyone on this site that uses more shades than that.

The pants look a little odd. I think you were trying to give the impression that they're baggy? In that case, I recommend some fold lines on the pants; looks like you already did that with the glove...things? Armbands? That's what they're called, right? I don't know what articles of clothing are named. I'm surprised I even know what pants are. But yeah, something like what you did on the armbands.

I mean it when I say it's a start. I bet if I tried to draw something it'd look like chicken scratch. Still, hope you take my advice into account. Happy Drawing!

JermhyTheHedgehog,

June 22nd, 2015, 4:24 pm

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@Syogren: Thank's this is a really helpful review.

Syogren,

June 22nd, 2015, 5:48 pm

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@JermhyTheHedgehog: No problem, glad I could help.

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