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April 15th, 2015, 12:39 am

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Bringer_of_light,

April 15th, 2015, 12:39 am

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Hey guys! been awhile since I've posted here <.< mostly because I left it and then rejoined

anyways I"ve been fucking around with making BGs lately, and this is what I came up with, a town called Newspring. The trees and road weren't made by me, but everything else was. I need to add more mountains in the bg I think

also bonus points to whoever knows which city this is based off of

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Whip the Rabbit,

April 16th, 2015, 12:28 am

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With the inclusion of Beaks I can only assume this is either based on the locale in Edge of Pizza before the nuclear apocolypse that made everything made of bricks and mortar and also everyone a sociopath, or Neroe finally cracked and opened up a bird-based adult store of some kind.
Dear merciful stars please tell me it's the former.
Also, everything looks really kickin', like, seriously beautiful to look at, except for the sky, which is as depressing as an average day in downtown London, and the conifer trees in the background, which do not look like they wanted to be transparent. XD
If you're at all looking for criticism, then maybe a bit brighter skies(Unless the dreary aspect is what you were looking for) and... uh...
I don't know how to fix the transparency issue besides just making your own trees and maybe super-imposing them on a cheaply drawn, blurred out hillside? XD
That's my two cents~ It looks fantastic in every respect even with these nitpicks~ =3
EDIT: *Notes that SAZ comics has no entrance*
*So comicbook fans have to pass through the alluring scent of Metbucks before they can enter*
*Very shrewd business tactic, that is~ >w>*

Syogren,

April 17th, 2015, 7:41 pm

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>Notices SAZ
HEY GUYS YOU SHOULD REBOOT SAZ AND LIKE, ADD ME TO IT! THAT WOULD END WELL, RIGHT!? -shot-

Joking aside, looks good so far. I only have two pieces of advice:

1) The buildings look a little off right now with just texture and little shading. If there's a way to shade it without messing it up, that would make it look better. I say if because I sure as heck don't know how. Last time I tried to make a background it looked far simpler than this and looked even worse regardless.

2) Also, these buildings could use some uh...how do I describe it...basically they look like cutouts as opposed to 3D Structures. They need depth. Oh right, I know what I'm trying to say. I want to see the side walls. Yeah, that's it.

Also everything whip said. Looks glorious otherwise, though. Also this is totally straight from Edge of Pizza, right?

Bringer_of_light,

April 18th, 2015, 1:25 am

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@Whip the Rabbit: thanks and yeah ill brighten up the sky a bit. AND YEAH FUCK THOSE TREES DUDE GOD

@Syogren: idk adding walls would make the perspective off? like it's from a straight on view, there's literally no angle at all so it's kind of be weird. As for shading, im hella lazy. I was gonna shade it more but because its large areas its hard and IM LAZY

Syogren,

April 21st, 2015, 9:04 am

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@Bringer_of_light: Haha, fair enough.

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