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Red Fox 2 - Mr.Star

October 14th, 2014, 12:53 am

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MrStarster,

October 14th, 2014, 1:03 am

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Well, I honestly want to do the comic just because it be something to do. If it doesn't kick off... I'm not sure if I'll continue it but I'm willing to try.
Still, I'd like a bit more feedback on the character before I make it.

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Dregan,

October 14th, 2014, 11:36 am

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He looks good - though the main thing I'd advise is adjusting the angle of the head slightly. He sort of has the issue at the moment that he looks like he's looking at the camera/audience in over half of his poses, which'll look kinda off when he's required to be in scenes with other characters.
I'm not sure if they're MEANT to be looking at us, so that might not be quite legitimate criticism, but it would seem odd to have more poses looking at us than there are looking elsewhere.

MrStarster,

October 14th, 2014, 4:43 pm

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Hmmm. No I can see your point. I think if he is going to look at the commenter that position is good but a bit more of an angle might help for other interactions rather than his full on look strait ahead face. To be honest, I didn't even think of that fact so thanks.

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