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Shard-Up 2.0

September 11th, 2014, 11:55 pm

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Shard,

September 11th, 2014, 11:55 pm

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For some reason whenever I sprite Shard I'm not happy with it but this looks pretty decent so I'd like the crits to improve it?

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Snurple-the-Hedgehog,

September 11th, 2014, 11:57 pm

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First, remove the emotes on the original, it seems like she enjoys seeing her own booty. It's creepy.

Second, I think the pelvis on the right seems to be a bit off, probably because the extra pixel is making it look like that, the area where the leg meets the foot seems abrupt as well. Other than that, seems good to me.

Zoroark,

September 12th, 2014, 4:16 am

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Shading on her shoes make them look like morning slippers. Does her tail just come out of her whole back? It basically covers the more then the height of the torso.

Yamataro,

September 12th, 2014, 11:36 am

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Can I have the sexticals with the second one? lololol, but really, what the guys above me said.

Luxbot,

September 13th, 2014, 11:48 am

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Shard Prism power, make up? :o

DelSoul,

September 14th, 2014, 5:20 pm

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The tail need to be a bit small, by looking at it the tail dont seem to be getting smaller when it reach your behind. The head pice is darn right cute. But there something off about your shirt specially the shoulders. The body seem okay for a naked base, but the top left side of the leg need to lose one of the pixel. That and i can't really tell if you made her taller or small.

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