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I made a fire.

August 5th, 2014, 2:52 am

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spark th,

August 5th, 2014, 6:35 am

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I'm assuming his whole body is mean to be fire? Because right now it just looks like a guy who's head combusted, and happens to have a red body. Don't be afraid to do more of the scattered pixels, to represent little sparks flicking off from his body.

also, as a personal thing, I don't think he needs clothes.. unless, for some reason he has private parts that need to be covered up. I know he is, literally, one of the hottest people around but I think that would be a little... ridiculous? I dunno, that's just a personal thing.

Otherwise it's not a bad sprite. Shading is pretty good BUT, and this is a big but, you might want to consider messing with it a tad. After all, he IS his own light source, is he night? Generally speaking the main source of the fire is the center of the sparks, and right now it looks as if it's originating from his... neck? The front of his face? Fire has several points where it would light up, and right now his lower torso looks to be VERY unaffected by it. ...I'm not doing a very good job of explaining this, so here, have a link:
http://gyazo.com/9331f54e40eccc73666daaad005b2bba

Basically, instead of just having a SINGULAR point of origin for his lightest points, the many embers that make up the flame would also have different points, so his legs would have the lightest shade as well? Mess around with it a little. I did this is.... 3 minutes? so it's not perfect, but it should give you a rough idea of what to do.

but as a whole, it's a very good sprite and I like it! I'm looking forward to seeing more :)

Moon light madness,

August 5th, 2014, 6:52 am

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@spark th: Thanks. I will do just that. And as for the clothes I wasn't gonna add any besides the wrist band.

Demo9,

August 5th, 2014, 1:02 pm

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Through the Fire and Flame?

Moon light madness,

August 6th, 2014, 1:53 pm

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@Demo9: WRONG! :}
set fire to the rain.

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