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July 21st, 2014, 7:25 pm

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Snurple-the-Hedgehog,

July 21st, 2014, 7:33 pm

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Well guys, it's been a while since I have done some spriting work, I have decided to take a huge step ahead of myself and experiment on many things such as shading and proportions. Including with coloring...

But since I took a huge step ahead of myself, I know I would need a lot of C+C, soooo...

Anyone?

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Shard,

July 21st, 2014, 9:22 pm

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He looks like he's leaning forwards. Also, I feel like the dithery-shading is unnecessary at a sprite of that size, and the light sourcing is a bit awkward on the head. The head fin looks like it's been shoved onto his head - it doesn't really look natural- and the hands feel too small for the sprite. Also, I feel like he should have a longer snout since sharks tend to have those? And the belt seems too thin to really be that effective.

Light-Called-Hope,

July 22nd, 2014, 2:44 am

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The arm as a whole seems too thin, his 'muzzle' just looks of to me. I think that with a sprite of that size that the eyes should be a bit different from the usual Sonic eyes.

Felix Wind,

July 22nd, 2014, 4:51 pm

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Everyone else kinda covered it but I will say

I like the way the tail is shaded so keep that; however I don't think it works for the rest of the body.

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