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Is this any better?

May 9th, 2014, 1:35 am

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Royle McCulloch,

May 9th, 2014, 1:35 am

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Well?

Really, I could use some help this one is giving me grief.

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Xenocide,

May 9th, 2014, 2:19 am

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The anatomy in general is just kind of awkward. The legs have no real sense of depth, and visually I can't see which one is closer to the viewer, the arms are really thin and oddly positioned, and it all just looks sort of odd.

Royle McCulloch,

May 9th, 2014, 2:44 am

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http://deviantart.com/#/art/The-cursed-Fennec-s-Thumbnail-sketches-441213684?hf=1

Well i've been trying to go for something like that.

Ultimate the Hedgehog,

May 9th, 2014, 9:46 am

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it's a little better but Xenocide is right.

Nick Cypher The Flames,

May 9th, 2014, 11:36 am

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If I may suggest something, maybe make whichever leg is supposed to be at the back a pixel higher than the frontal foot? Another note that's nagging me is the arms seem a couple pixels too long. Also even in the sketches, in a stationary pose on the detailed draws, the back foot is showed being slightly higher in relation to the front foot.

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