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Karee

March 3rd, 2014, 4:12 pm

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Shard,

March 3rd, 2014, 4:12 pm

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Here's a thing I've been working on. Karee is essentially an anthromorphic lava blob wearing a hardened lava helmet and glove-claw things, whose size changes based on its consumption. There is another size, but I wanted to get critique on the default size (chao size) and the medium size (sonic size) before I moved forward.

These are also 100% custom. The sprites next to them are just there for size reference.

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Shard,

March 3rd, 2014, 4:59 pm

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Read through Dreggles' critique and updated the thing.



Looking better or no?

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Dregan,

March 3rd, 2014, 4:21 pm

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Hm... A couple of things I'd advise in terms of improvement.
Be vary wary of using your darkest shades to layer the lava like you have - it makes the shading too thick and adds too much depth between the ridges - looks less like flowing lava and more that he has kinda very sold lopsided boobs.
Also might wanna consider if he's lava that.. well, lava glows, it's it's own light source. Might wanna play around with the shading and add maybe a few brighter highlight shades to add some shine.

Kurona,

March 3rd, 2014, 4:22 pm

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h-how the fuck did you make this

Yamataro,

March 3rd, 2014, 4:58 pm

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Everything Dregan says is true. Also, with it being Lava, his functionality would be mainly volcano regions, as temperature of the air would cause him to harden slowly over time, unless there is like a source in there that's providing new lava every few seconds. Also he/she/it'd melt though most surfaces he/she/it'd stand on. Is a perplexition, a creature made of lava.

Syogren,

March 3rd, 2014, 5:57 pm

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@Kurona: THIS

Salimus,

March 3rd, 2014, 9:14 pm

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Lava often has tiny chunk of rock and stone in it. It often look black and burnt. Also, don't forget that lava lights up, Niv! Use it as a secondary light source.

Kurona,

March 4th, 2014, 1:54 am

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I can't unsee the lopsided boobs

Thanks Dregan

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