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Sleepy time girl - Yama(soweirdputtingthat...)

February 28th, 2014, 12:55 pm

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Shard,

February 28th, 2014, 1:06 pm

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The hands and feet seem a little bit awkward, and I'm not sure what you're going for as far as the chest area goes. Speaking of the chest, it's a lot bigger than the lower half, making it look like her proportions are a bit... hem, awkward. Eyes aren't usually straight lines when they're closed, her face looks like it could use some more shading, and her hair is rather stiff - which is OK for more cartoony stuff but it looks like you were trying for realism here. I suggest looking up a picture of someone in the pose you want to make, or hell even taking a picture of yourself in that pose, and using it as a reference - much like how, if you're no certain on details for a pose, you can go into the pose yourself for some specifics.

Yamataro,

February 28th, 2014, 1:12 pm

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... I did (use a reference, several in fact) Shard. And I even got lot of people to look it over and it all seemed good to them. As for straight line eyes, that's becase I tried to make them not so, and it ended in her looking mad or happy in sleep which I didn't want. i wanted a straight face. As for chest, she is rounder woman, and when placed on your back like that that's sort of what boobs do. Lower half seems fine to me, could possibly be lengthened, but I made the mistake of going for a 5 head tall figure, so I guestimated alot of the propotions of some things to what would look right. As for hands and feet, those suck, ok? Hands and feet are hard as hell to do. Best I could do with the limited area. Thanks for the Crit though. I will consider them for the drawing itself.

Kurona,

February 28th, 2014, 5:17 pm

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Really, beauty is completely a matter of subjectivity - everything's beautiful to someone.

Yamataro,

February 28th, 2014, 5:32 pm

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@Kurona: This man gets it.

Bringer_of_light,

February 28th, 2014, 6:22 pm

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Yea there's a bunch of things that look really awkward int his no offence.

The way her hair behind her arm looks looks chunky and clumpy. The eyes are awks, and the lack of shading on her face seems weird... Hands and feet, already mentioned. Knees look odd too.

It's all been mentioned I guess, idk.

Zoroark,

March 1st, 2014, 8:09 pm

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Shes fapping.

Yamataro,

March 2nd, 2014, 1:35 am

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@Zoroark: Yeah. Ttly. Cause you know. Hand on top of shorts means she's ttly doing something naughty.

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