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CamTro's Major Revamp...~CamTro

December 1st, 2013, 8:49 pm

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Zoroark,

December 1st, 2013, 11:55 pm

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Pallet could use some more contrast.

Royle McCulloch,

December 2nd, 2013, 8:14 am

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The blue does not go well with that brown. Change one of them.

Syogren,

December 2nd, 2013, 3:18 pm

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Awww...his previous quills looked cooler...aw well

The Wonderous Kitsu,

December 2nd, 2013, 5:37 pm

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Well, here's some criticism;

First of all, the shades need more contrast. The shading could use more work, especially on those quills, and his jacket. Those pants...They are pretty much pillow shaded, you should change that. The lightest shade of his skin doesn't match well with the previous shade, And his pose, he's hunched forward, not a lot, but a little, being hunched over in a pose doesn't look natural, so that should be changed. Other minor things, like the hair and ears, can be fixed easily, but I think you should focus on shading, like, a lot, because a lot of it is pillow shaded, or shaded weirdly. Oh and, proportion-wise, he looks more like a pre-teen than a teenager, and he looks a lot smaller than his previous version. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but... Overall this needs just a tad bit more work on shading, and proportions (maybe). But, I do like his quills in this version, so that's cool.

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