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KétDate 2.0 -Shard

November 29th, 2012, 6:28 pm

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Shard,

November 29th, 2012, 6:28 pm

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The main problem people seemed to be having with the previous sprite was that the arms were too close to the body/made it look too squished/etc. So I tried to fix it. Was I successful or should I maybe use different arms?

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DelSoul,

November 29th, 2012, 7:30 pm

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Yeah it looks better then before. You got the arms just right.

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Luxbot,

November 29th, 2012, 6:32 pm

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As far as I'm concerned, it looks good.

.:AuraX:.,

November 29th, 2012, 6:32 pm

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yeah, I'd say that's better.

Scar,

November 29th, 2012, 6:36 pm

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Even better.

EclipseTC,

November 29th, 2012, 9:20 pm

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Better, the arms are perfect, but I have to agree with PolarStar to a minor degree.

Afroman17,

November 29th, 2012, 11:25 pm

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The white seems pillow-y

Shard,

November 30th, 2012, 1:14 am

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Y'know, I really wish you guys would be more specific. I am not the great spriter you make me out to be, I don't know what you mean when you say "too many shades". Are there too many shades because I use four shades for each color? Are there too many shades based on the way I shaded the sprite? Just saying "it has too many shades" is quite possibly the least helpful piece of critique ever if you don't specify what the ever-loving heck you mean by shades. STOP TREATING ME LIKE I KNOW EVERYTHING. I DON'T. When you give me critique, do it as if I have no idea what I'm doing, because I really don't. Tell me specifically what 'too many shades' means so I know if it's a problem with my style or how I'm shading or if it's just a pet peeve of yours or what. Please and thank you.

Muddykip64,

November 30th, 2012, 6:18 am

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@Shard: Wait. I think I understand what's going on.

It's not the sprites I admire. It's the characters themselves!

Dangit, that was not helpful at all.

DelSoul,

November 30th, 2012, 11:15 am

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@PolarStar: When I look at both of them, Her shade is okay but PolarStar Your is like....eh what the word...damn it kinda looked worst then hers, anyway to me it her style of shading and your style of shading. Pretty shard shading is okay some part of her hair look pillow from a far but close up it not. Like Afroman said The white seems pillow.

Shard,

November 30th, 2012, 1:44 pm

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...DelSoul basically covered what I was going to say, yeah. It seems like your problems with my shading isn't so much my shading so much as it is the shading I use for my spriting style. I don't like your 'fix' because I don't like using black outlines on sprites and whatnot... gives it a bit too much of a cartoony feel or something and that's not really what I'm going for, nor does it match my sprite work. Also Két despises wearing colors so she'd never wear that shirt.

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