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November 28th, 2012, 7:21 pm

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Shard,

November 28th, 2012, 7:21 pm

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In accordance with me being a finicky person, I've decided to revamp Két's sprites. Thoughts, critique, etc before I start making poses?

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Scar,

November 28th, 2012, 7:37 pm

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Amazing, as usual. :3

I did like her design before, but I also like this one.

I don't know what to critique because it is too good~

EclipseTC,

November 28th, 2012, 7:38 pm

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I'll try to describe the one problem I'm seeing to the best of my ability. The inside of the jacket needs to bend towards the back of the body a little more and the other side of it should be visible.

Edit: Not that it matters, but that lime green bg kinda hurts my eyes.

Salimus,

November 28th, 2012, 8:18 pm

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The arm of her jacket seems a bit too big at where it connects with her hand to me. That's the only real complaint I have.

DelSoul,

November 28th, 2012, 8:28 pm

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Like the new look.

Heligate,

November 28th, 2012, 8:42 pm

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The jacket arm, as prevously mentioned, is a tad too big, and the shoulder and upper arm could go one pixel further away from the body, considering it looks really smashed together with the upper torso.

TouhouShake,

November 28th, 2012, 8:47 pm

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Pretteh~
That pony tail is a cute touch to her adult-look.

spark th,

November 29th, 2012, 10:18 am

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Her arm, as other people have mentioned, is way to mashed together and lumpy. It could do with being move backed a few pixels, and the far arm being brought forwards slightly. the leg that isn't covered is simply to straight. Nobody has a leg that is as straight as a plank, that can support them. I'd change it so it's slanted slightly. Head is leaning forwards to much, bring it back a few pixels.

Besides this, it's a fairly nice design.

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