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Bre V6

November 16th, 2012, 5:43 pm

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G.B.A,

November 16th, 2012, 5:52 pm

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No thanks. I'm not liking version 6, why? Well look at that head and that 'hair'.

:S

Bre Ishurna the Wolf,

November 16th, 2012, 5:53 pm

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@G.B.A: Apparently, it was the exact opposite with the OC review.

"Wig"?

plokman,

November 16th, 2012, 5:54 pm

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Guh that hair!

Bre Ishurna the Wolf,

November 16th, 2012, 5:55 pm

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@plokman: It was designed to be similar to Amy's or Knuckles.

I really need to scan the drawing :/

Muddykip64,

November 16th, 2012, 5:55 pm

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@Bre Ishurna the Wolf: How accurate is that review? V5 is far superior.

King_Rover,

November 16th, 2012, 5:55 pm

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I think the hairstyle would great if was drawn but it doesn't look good in sprite form.

Faekmastah,

November 16th, 2012, 5:56 pm

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The clothes look good, but the hair needs work. A lot of work.

spark th,

November 16th, 2012, 5:57 pm

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....no, just...no.


Those "quills" stick to far out the back of her head, it's like she has some kind of weird tumor. her body is jutting to far forwards and just seem to blend with her feet.

Her arm is to thing, her hand to large for it.

shading could do with being touched up


TL;DR: fugly as all fuck, redo quills and body position, and make arms slightly thicker.

Bre Ishurna the Wolf,

November 16th, 2012, 5:58 pm

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@Muddykip64: http://bre-ishurna.tumblr.com/post/35789991253/review-2-bre-the-wolf

Click the "Read More" link and read it.
Yep. They not only thrashed me, but they mugged me of all my money, stole my car, and killed my cats. I didn't care much though, even though I died a bit inside.

foxpuff,

November 16th, 2012, 6:00 pm

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To be honest I prefer V5.

G.B.A,

November 16th, 2012, 6:01 pm

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@Bre Ishurna the Wolf

http://thebluntsonicocreviewer.tumblr.com/post/35747874349/review-2-bre-the-wolf

I see.

Don't feel bad, you did a fine job being Cyan.

Bre Ishurna the Wolf,

November 16th, 2012, 6:02 pm

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@G.B.A: That was not cyan, that was light blue.
Kazz was possibly color blind

TouhouShake,

November 16th, 2012, 6:13 pm

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V5 actually looks GOOD.
V6 is kinda odd looking.
And this isn't the kind of "odd" I like normally.
But it's your choice if it's desired or not.

Luxbot,

November 16th, 2012, 6:27 pm

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That person that doesn't like special swords.

Dangit I lose some points for that.

Anyway, I like V5 SO MUCH BETTER. The hair and quills look strange, the top looks pretty blocky, the pants and feet look really awkward and the colors seem a little thrown together. And, just like sparkth said, some colors blend into eachother.

yoshi freak,

November 16th, 2012, 6:40 pm

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If those "reviewers" ever came to Reidy's or even Smack Jeeves, they would rage quit... after the first or second character

Scar,

November 16th, 2012, 6:55 pm

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V5 is far superior.

Those reviewers are loco.

ShaunTheVoiceOfVoiceLess,

November 16th, 2012, 7:28 pm

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@spark th: Exactly what he said.

Salimus,

November 16th, 2012, 7:55 pm

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I think you should ignore that Sonic OC dude. Not sure if I like the way he thinks. Personally, I see nothing wrong with your old design!

I dislike the new one for several reasons. That hair looks more like Knuckle quills than any thing and they attach oddly and looks disjointed. They was nothing wrong with your design of hair. Secondly, the face looks really scrunched up and that nose is placed oddly. The only thing I actually like about the new one is the shoes. They have more personality and are not as bland.

Take my advice, don't go to reviewer for help. You know what you want and if you don't like their suggestions then don't take them. You know what you want, and only you do. Work with something until you are satisfied, but if it's not broke to you, then don't fix it! All they are doing is smothering creativity. (And this is the part where I rant about them.) Srsly, there's nothing wrong with being able to run on all fours and have a bipedal built BECAUSE IT IS FICTIONAL. Have a sword you can bond with? Why the hell not! You don't have to abide with the laws of a Universe. Drunk on chocolate? Frankly, it's creative and an interesting thing to add to her. Dogs and wolves actually get sick of of the stuff anyways, so it does make some sense, if you like logic.

Bre Ishurna the Wolf,

November 16th, 2012, 8:43 pm

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@Salimus: Paha. I'll take those into account.

Anyways, This design actually grew on me in a few minutes. The drawing's still better, though. :/

Muddykip64,

November 16th, 2012, 10:46 pm

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Read the description. That was all BS. Ignore whoever the guy is. He said you were cyan, and you obviously are not. Guy should get his colors straight.

Salimus,

November 16th, 2012, 11:21 pm

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@Bre Ishurna the Wolf: Well, if you realy like it then keep trying. Execution needs a little work, if you know what I mean. ^^

Bre Ishurna the Wolf,

November 17th, 2012, 12:26 am

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http://bre-ishurna.deviantart.com/#/d5lbtfj
Just gonna leave this here, yep yep.

Irene the SeedrianRabbit,

November 17th, 2012, 12:47 am

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Personally, I like the older design more, but I do like V6's outfit a little better.
The color palette is also a lot better too, in comparison to the original.

But lol, fail.
*brick'd*

Sadpanda,

November 17th, 2012, 3:02 am

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They had one hell of a point when it came to the backstory, traits, and special powers.

You should really focus on that.

I personally was never a fan of V5, no hate intended, and not really a fan of this one either.

I want to make this fast, so here we go.
'V6'
-The hair looks like knuckles. Lolwut? The way it bends is all curazy. I think I see what you're trying to do with it though. Work on it, you're close but no dice. Work with the top left of your hair, that's making the characters head quite big.
-The front hair is all crazy like. As in, all over the place. And than the hair stems into the middle of her eyes? That makes no sense.
-The mouth seems odd. Like, you were going to made the view point of the head different, than suddenly 3D? In general though the nose is odd. Move the air up and the nose more out?
-Body is fine I guess, not sure why your characters chest is being puffed out in the most manly way possible though.
-The bottom part was fine..But than we come to the shoes. I don't get exactly what you're trying to do. Are they flipflops? Boots? I feel you tried to go too unique and it started to clash.

for V5..
The hair did look off. If you want legit comments on the sprite itself, the hair isn't shaded that great. The tail is upsidedown. The ear is like 'What.' and learns forward like hell, but that may just be the view of the sprite.

Take my comments how you like.

.:AuraX:.,

November 17th, 2012, 12:30 pm

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...honestly I like the cyan.

ShaunTheVoiceOfVoiceLess,

November 17th, 2012, 5:02 pm

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@Sadpanda:

Pie God,

November 18th, 2012, 5:32 pm

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Holdon wait, that's supposed to be female, right?

ShaunTheVoiceOfVoiceLess,

November 18th, 2012, 7:05 pm

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@Pie God: I think...

Korbeh,

November 19th, 2012, 8:43 pm

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quick question

why the hell is she thrusting her upper body outward. she looks like she's going to fall over.

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