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Thansumon - Salimus

November 16th, 2012, 9:44 am

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Yamataro,

November 16th, 2012, 9:53 am

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*feelssobumped* But mine was a stupid pic, so. Anyway, Looks pretty good, do have a few complaints though.. 1. Shading. It's... all over the place. Some of it even looks to be pillowed, but that could just be the way I'm looking at it. 2. The bended knee is too long, making one side of him look huge and deformed compared to the other. Same leg also looks super bulked. 3. Arm that is 'behind' him, seems to be bending backward a bit, this might be just me.

It's not bad, just needs work is all.

Salimus,

November 16th, 2012, 10:38 am

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@Yamataro: Hum, I guess I can see what you're saying about the shading, but personally, I don't really see it. The bend in the knee is the because he has legs similar to the hind ones of a dog. The bend looks big because there are actually three parts to his leg. The arm doesn't seem backward to me, though I'm never happy trying to place arms like that on any one. It's tough getting it to a point where you can see it and it doesn't look to big or disjointed.

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