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Zorial Gladis

October 24th, 2012, 4:08 pm

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Scar,

October 24th, 2012, 5:01 pm

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I like the idea. Not like it's never been done before. But it's not overused.

Onto the sprite. I actually quite like the design and all. My one nitpick if I had to choose would be the shirt seems a little too high up. But maybe there is a reason for that.

All things aside, nice job Luxy.

Sadpanda,

October 24th, 2012, 6:28 pm

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The hair is a bit crazy, but 2 is the best. 3 and 4 verge on ridiculous, and 1 just seems odd in the back.

I also noticed a lack of ear.
Yeah.

Other than that, the shirt jacket thing is a bit weird looking. For one, it seems a little high up there, as in his legs are huge and his shirt is just really small. But if you really like it, you can stick with it. The only huge problem I have with it is I can't even tell exactly what kind of shirt you have. It looks like it's a long sleeve shirt with a muffler, but than there is that white line, so maybe it could be a open jacket, but that doesn't make a whole lot of sense, so maybe it's really just a zipped up jacket with a muffler thing going on?

Less shirt uniqueness, more "Oh, so that's what I am looking at" detail.

Or I just may be greatly confused and everyone else can tell what it is.

Everything below the shirt looks ok, maybe change up the shading for the pants. It just looks really pillowed in the center where his legs touch.

Luxbot,

October 24th, 2012, 7:15 pm

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@Sadpanda:

How about this? By the way, the white line on the shirt is simply a stripe.

http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/pb/7/7IqvAfQAM5nBJJQ0TgGy2i.png

Sadpanda,

October 24th, 2012, 8:24 pm

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Better, but the right side looks a tad off. Hard to fix though, because you don't want to make it flat. It's not that noticeable though.
Also, now that I take a second look, the pants look kind of odd. More so, the left leg. The leg just looks odd, not sure what about it makes it look that way though.

I'll let someone else try to figure it out. I'm sure someone else on this comic has an idea of fixes.

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