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My Two Reploids Some Fixes C + C ~ Scar

October 13th, 2012, 6:24 pm

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Scar,

October 13th, 2012, 6:47 pm

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@Gatamigo: Ok, thank you, taking that into consideration. And I agree about the C + C. There was one dude who said I was awful and didn't try to help, but the rest has been very nice and helpful. (No seperate lines, I am improving, dammit! xD)

Muddykip64,

October 13th, 2012, 9:53 pm

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^.^

I'll try being less negative now. I have more to be proud of after all.

Salimus,

October 13th, 2012, 10:08 pm

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One think I find wrong is the girl's legs and the boy's arms. With the girl, the lightest shade of her legs does not match the rest of her skin. Her hair also appears flat as each individual shade that makes it up appears too similar. Try redoing the pallet. The Boy's arm is also a bit too bulky. Remember to slim the arm down at the wrist, just not by cutting off one pixel from either side though, it looks awkward and inncorrect if you do it like that.

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