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October 2nd, 2012, 5:50 pm

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Muddykip64,

October 3rd, 2012, 5:45 am

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These look good! Keep up the good work!

Shard,

October 4th, 2012, 5:35 am

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@senalcoolage- C&C is 'Comments and Critique' last I checked. That being said-

1- I agree with Gata, the shades need more contrast.
2- Both of them look like their heads are kinda flat. You probably just added the hair in after erasing the hat: maybe try making a bald head and drawing the hair in over that.
3- The short one's feet are facing too far apart, or at least it looks that way, especially when comparing him to the tall one. Try make his feet more like the tall guy's, or at least more natural-looking.

That's about all though and as far as a comment goes... Eh... Hope you find my 3 am iPod critique good.

Muddykip64,

October 4th, 2012, 6:28 am

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@senalcoolage: Ya, maybe I should stop commenting.

Kirbysmith [DJ],

October 4th, 2012, 2:37 pm

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@Muddykip64: Gata's right, stop being so pessimistic and full of self-pity. Those are MY defining traits. >:(

@Senal: Also, shorty's feet look awkward. They'd be better if the heels were flat on the ground.
Tall guy's pants seem weird where they touch the shoes. The cuffs seem too rounded.

Muddykip64,

October 4th, 2012, 4:37 pm

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@Gatamigo: Now you're making me feel self pity for feeling self pity. Recursion much?

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