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Jeff the ghost~Yama

June 3rd, 2011, 4:37 pm

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robybang,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:38 pm

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You need to fix the arm. And the clothes are overshaded.

Yamataro,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:39 pm

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Gosh darn. Thanks. Also, I am needing C+C on this.

Edit: Fixed. Is that better?

RyoSoulreaper,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:41 pm

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>Comic? Y

Here's some dialog:

Rage,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:41 pm

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There is still a lot of shadows below the waist, and the eyes are strangely shaped.

Yamataro,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:43 pm

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I only used 4 shades... Fine. Down to three. And I'll work on eyes. Thanks.

Reign of Chaos,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:47 pm

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He looks too depressed, brighten his expression a little.

...Even though he's dead.

Yamataro,

June 3rd, 2011, 4:49 pm

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Fixed shades down to three, Eye's fixed to best of ability. As for expression, when I fixed eyes, did that help?

Made in Nexus,

June 3rd, 2011, 5:47 pm

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I have an idea, guys. Sprite something normal and just make them transparent. Good idea? IIIIIIIIIII KNOOOOOOOOOOOW.

Risky2k,

June 3rd, 2011, 6:00 pm

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Contrast.

XP_Lulz,

June 3rd, 2011, 6:38 pm

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I don't like the shape of the head.

It looks retarded.

:|

robybang,

June 3rd, 2011, 6:42 pm

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I wouldn't try fixing it anymore. It's probably the best thing you've ever made, Yama.

robybang,

June 3rd, 2011, 6:56 pm

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That's because you don't believe enough, JBlack. Just clap your hands and say "I believe in Yama's sprites" over and over until you see it.

Made in Nexus,

June 3rd, 2011, 7:54 pm

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Except he's totally pillowshading.

lern2surture,

June 3rd, 2011, 8:11 pm

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i'd already made something like this if i wasn't afraid of bumping jamie
:Y

Kirbysmith [DJ],

June 4th, 2011, 11:58 am

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No, no, NOOOOO!!! This is wrong! What is this? Is this what you call a good sprite?! This is stupid! This is just The Emperor's New Clothes all over again.
Take my advice...

PUT A SHIRT ON HIM, FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!!

And I now the girls think it's hot, but ghosts aren't supposed to have chest hair. X*

Raging Ghost,

June 4th, 2011, 12:14 pm

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Come on. There's nothing in it. It's just a transparent square.

Rage,

June 4th, 2011, 12:44 pm

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^ Only intelligent people can see him.

Rage,

June 4th, 2011, 1:29 pm

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^ JBLACK YOU CAN'T COVER YOUR MISTAKES http://puu.sh/2pnk

lern2surture,

June 4th, 2011, 6:05 pm

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^ i lol'd

Irene the SeedrianRabbit,

June 7th, 2011, 12:26 am

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He's beautiful. He's like the god's kin. 'O'

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